Oh goodness, you drew my favorite pony when she was a filly <3 To start off, the first thing that caught my eye was her fluffy pink mane. I like how you didn't make sad Pinkamena drawing, but a serene, sweet Pinkie. I love how you added the rocks, having them hold the paper down and as pieces in her room. Her having the crayon taped onto her hoove was also a wonderful touch. The only thing that's an "issue" to the picture was the tear running down Pinkie's cheek. I had to take a second glance to realize it was a tear. Maybe the tear could have a blue-ish hue and be a little more translucent. Overall, the picture is beautiful, heart-warming and adorable.
Filly Pinkie. Now for critique... The vision for this is clear, Pinkie drawing a picture of her family using crayon. The way that you did this was great, taping the crayon to her hoof was simply genius. And adorable. Originality is quite good, especially since it breaks away from the normally depressed filly Pinkie. Technique is good, though if there is one thing that I will note here, it's that some of the lines in areas are a little bit sketchy and could use more definition. That aside, the lighting, shading and colouring used here is great. Impact overall: A very heartwarming and innocent scene, with great colouring and ideas. Overall, great piece
Ya know, one thing I really like is that she has to tape the crayons to her hoof...I imagine it would be hard for earth ponies to write/draw without opposable thumbs. And it all makes a very cute picture. ^^
Excuse me sorry to waste your time but Samd Josiepth send me her when I asked if he knew anyone who does picture requests, I recently made a fan-fiction called Screwball's Wish, and I was hoping i'd find someone to draw a pic of ther staring into the dark sky while only one star shined
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