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Scurred Colored by leadhooves Scurred Colored by leadhooves
Colored mostly because :iconwhitediamondsltd: wanted to see it =P

Might open commissions over the weekend, so if you're interested stay tuned to my tumblr and dA.

(also, I require a sandwich edit of this for kicks)

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:icondiamondcharm:
Hi there! Long time watcher, first time commenter. I was organizing my pics when I noticed something and remembered you wanted critiques - so, here goes.

The only thing that stood out to me as 'wrong' is fairly small - the light reflected in AJ's eyes doesn't look indicative of the light source in the room being in front of and below her. Instead, it looks like the brightest light in the room, when looking ONLY at her eyes, is above her.

Well, I've said something I DIDN'T like so I feel vaguely obligated to mention some things I REALLY like. The first is actually really mundane. I liked the messy line on the corner of the wall. It gives it that EXTRA shadowy feel, and for some reason it just seems right in this picture. As well, the shading on AJ and her immediate surroundings is brilliant, though, maybe it's just me, but her hat mayyybe need to cast more shadow above the right ridge. The colors used were spot on, and the expression on her face really makes you feel for her. Uhm. Sorry I couldn't be more technical? I hope you don't mind critique from a positively terrible artist!
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:iconsavercat:
SaverCat Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013  Student Artist
lol i love it
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:iconnorthwestcore:
Northwestcore Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Really like the lighting.
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:iconomgcheez:
omgCheez Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012
Awesome! :D
The colouring and drawing is great. :D
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:iconrayodragon:
Rayodragon Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The Pear is starting at me.
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:iconstickman00:
stickman00 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012
"Do yo thing don't be scurred"
Sandwich edit? now your speaking my language. Do you want the sandwich drawn or photoshopped?
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:iconleadhooves:
leadhooves Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
whatever's funnier :V
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:iconstickman00:
stickman00 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012
ok
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:iconwhitediamondsltd:
WhiteDiamondsLtd Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012  Professional General Artist
Oh, awwww, just look at the adorable little Applejack; she's even more charming when colored! This is lovely dear, and I'm so glad you decided to do it... the warm uplighting is very dramatic here, and though in a way it pains me to think of it I almost have to wonder if Applejack isn't trapped by a fire or something here (hopefully not, but certainly it would explain such an expression/body language). Whatever the case may be though, I think it's great, and thank you so much for coloring it largely because I wished to see it! :heart:
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:iconleadhooves:
leadhooves Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:3
Thank you
... I never inteded to give the impression of a fire >_>... but now I can't unsee it! D:
I tried to leave it as open to interpretation as I could =P
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:iconwhitediamondsltd:
WhiteDiamondsLtd Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012  Professional General Artist
Oh, well I am sorry for that! ^^; That was just the first thing that came to my mind... or well honestly, the lighting made me think of candles but I couldn't imagine Applejack would have any reason to be afraid of those.

Whatever the case may be though you're very welcome, and thank you again~! <3
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:iconcrazyjeux:
CrazyJeux Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012
Well, you'll understand the reason of her fear when I'll finish to write the chapter I'm writing with this image :)
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:icondanifox:
Danifox Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012
:iconprincesscelestiaplz: Gotcha!
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:iconmjbedi:
MJBedi Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh, no, poor AJ!
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:iconjklpb:
jklpb Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012
(little bit of attentionmongering) not quite what was requested, but: [link]
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:iconcharlesdeleroy:
Charlesdeleroy Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012
Applejack finds herself cornered by thousands of strange bipeds in the bizarre world she'd been thrust into, most of whom are wearing likenesses of herself and her friends!

Applejack has fallen into the Convention Zone.
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AleximusPrime Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I dunno what she's scared of, but I just wanna tickle that little tummy of hers! :3
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:iconsavage-yoshi819:
savage-yoshi819 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012
That's probably what she's scared of......wait,it's improper grammar to end a sentence with a prepesition.....so uh,b:censored:h.
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:iconaleximusprime:
AleximusPrime Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awwww, it won't hurt AJ!
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:iconpink--champagne:
Pink--Champagne Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012
She discovered rule34 dot paheal dot net
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:iconinarjollyhound:
Inarjollyhound Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012
*insert mission imposible theme with tobuscus singing*
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:iconzaiali:
zaiali Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012
This is pretty cool, but why does it turn me on?
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:iconasluc96:
asluc96 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, awesome colors mate :)
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:iconswanlullaby:
SwanLullaby Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice colouring!
I like her scared look :)
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:iconjaref:
Jaref Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012
Rarity is about to give her a makeover, with or without her permission :iconrarityjoyplz:

Looks great! Very nice job with the coloring ^^
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:icondewyunomi:
DewYunomi Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
AJ? Scurred? Say it ain't so!

This is awesome, though. Really, nice job!
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:icondoomzealot:
DoomZealot Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
AppeJack :D
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:iconanzul:
anzul Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Student General Artist
yeah, looking great dude :)
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:iconcrazyjeux:
CrazyJeux Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012
Very nice shading! Congrats again and thank you very much! :)
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:iconohcf:
OHCF Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012
AppleJack's true fear: :iconspiderjackplz:
Because posting it only once is never enough. :icondiscordtrollplz:
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:iconanzul:
anzul Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Student General Artist
HAHAHAH XD
oh god, this got to be on the pic!
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:icon039520:
039520 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012
:iconcrazypinkiepieplz::iconsaysplz:what's wrong? Are you scared of your BEST FRIEND?
:iconapplejackscaredplz::iconsaysplz: No! Pinkie, NO! leave me alone! please!?
:iconcrazypinkiepieplz::iconsaysplz:everypony scared of me or at least they WERE
:iconapplejackscaredplz::iconsaysplz:wha.. WHAT DO YA MEAN?
:iconpinkamenaplz::iconsaysplz:you will find out soon :3
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:iconbroneos:
BroNeos Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012
Applejack has no fear! :wow:
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:iconnuriomarayana:
NurioMarayana Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
...What's a sandwich edit? Is it some sort of fancy term or is it literally adding in a sandwich (for whatever strange reason)?

Also, I love AJ, so it's great to see this drawing colored in! Might consider this commission...
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:iconleadhooves:
leadhooves Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
it's adding a subway sandwich to the image like some people do to censor NSFW pictures... I think it's funny >_>
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:iconnuriomarayana:
NurioMarayana Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, that reminds me I once used a spring roll to censor an image for this visual novel company. (Yes...)

And I had actually somehow thought you meant that with a sandwich edit, because, well, reasons. I just didn't wanna say that guess out loud...
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