Scurred Colored

Hi there! Long time watcher, first time commenter. I was organizing my pics when I noticed something and remembered you wanted critiques - so, here goes.

The only thing that stood out to me as 'wrong' is fairly small - the light reflected in AJ's eyes doesn't look indicative of the light source in the room being in front of and below her. Instead, it looks like the brightest light in the room, when looking ONLY at her eyes, is above her.

Well, I've said something I DIDN'T like so I feel vaguely obligated to mention some things I REALLY like. The first is actually really mundane. I liked the messy line on the corner of the wall. It gives it that EXTRA shadowy feel, and for some reason it just seems right in this picture. As well, the shading on AJ and her immediate surroundings is brilliant, though, maybe it's just me, but her hat mayyybe need to cast more shadow above the right ridge. The colors used were spot on, and the expression on her face really makes you feel for her. Uhm. Sorry I couldn't be more technical? I hope you don't mind critique from a positively terrible artist!